Friday, March 27, 2015

‘Brother’ Devchar Kaddta!!! - I (Poilo Avisvor - Part 1)


SON’VARACHIM SUNGTTAM:

 

‘Brother’ Devchar Kaddta!!! - I

 
- Jose Salvador Fernandes



“Bhair sor devchara… bhair sor….” Oxim utram ghora vochpachie vatter astanam mhojea kanar sodoulim. Hanvem gaddi thamboyli. Polle zalear, tie sanjer, te-ui firgojent retir aslo. Tie firgojechea ugtea mollar cholpi tea retirak, azu-bazuchea-i ganvantlo lok ailolo mhonn, moneamni ubio aslolio bosi sangtalio. Tie uxir sanjer, retir sompunk oxem-toxem ek hor astanam, angar ‘kallo-so lob’ aslolo retir divpi, aplea talleak tras zaum porian, tie machier thaun, tallo soranttun mhonntalo - “Bhair sor devchara… bhair sor….  Hanv tuka hukum’ ghaltam, tum tachevelo bhair sor….. Jezuchea nanvan tachevelo bhair sor….. hangasor dusrie vollint ek ostori asa, tika atam pekovnni mellpacho vell aila… tichevelo devchar atam foddfoddunk lagla… tichie kuddintlo devchar atam tichi kudd apnnem soddun vecho vell lagim pavla mhonn voir-sokol zaunk lagla…. Soitana, hanv tuka sangtam, tichievelo bhair sor…” Tea retirant bhag ghevpi lok, konn ostorievelo devchar bhair sorta to polleunk utsuktayen aplio toklio hevtten-tevtten ghunvddaytalo. Retir divpiache sangati, astole sumar 7 te 8 tornnate, soglle ekech torechem ‘dress’ nheslole, oxe-toxe bhonvun retirak ailoleancher nodor bhonvddaytale. Tantuntlea dog zonnamni okosmat eke ostoriek dhorli, ani tika oddit-oddit retir divpi aslolie machiexim vheli. Tika atam to retir divpi kitem kortolo tem polleunk lok aplea pãyanchea bottancher ap-aplie porim lamb zatalo…. Hanv soglleam poros fattim aslom mhonntoch, tika thoim tannem kitem kelem tem mhaka mat disunk nam…

 

“Retir dita to padri konn?” Mhojie vorich gaddier bosun retir pollevpi, mhojea uzveak aslolie ostoriek hanvem vicharlem.

 

“Khobor nam…” Tinnem aplem nennarponn ugtaylem.

 

Retir divpiachi arodd choltanam, thoimsor mhojem-i mon vhoddlean yevzunk laglem… ‘Ho konn padri kay? Devchar kaddpachi haka koxi podvi favlia kay? Hachi ‘credibility’ kitem?’ Zalear dusriech goddiek, monan mhakach mhonnlem – ‘Kitem monis tum? Padrinchi-i ‘credibility’ sodunk laglo atam?....’      

 

“Fattlean konn eklo asa, to hea retirak atanch pavun sorla, ani tacher devchar boslolo asa…. Taka tea devcharachea chopkeantlean suttka divpachi atam goddi ailia… ” Burbur korun tache te ekech torechem ‘dress’ nheslole sangati fattlean yeun ube zale. Tanchio nodro “fattlean konn eklo asa, to hea retirak atanch pavun sorla, ani tacher devchar boslolo asa” mhonn sanglolem taka sodtalio. Mhaka ek goddibhor dislem – ho mhaka mhonnta kay? Hanv ‘self-conscious’ zalom.

 

“Vhoy, fattlean aslolea tea mon’xak atam, itlea kallan kherit suttka melltoli…. Itlo kall to devcharachea gulamponnant aslo…” Ekech torechem ‘dress’ nheslole tantuntle dog zonn mhojexim aile. Hevtten-tevtten nodor martanam, te mhaka-i polleunk lagle. Eklo tor mhojieveli nodoruch kaddunk toyar naslo….

 

“Atam ti goddi pavli…. Devchar boslolo to monis atam amche mukhar hanga ubo zatolo…. To devcharachea tabeantlo suttunk sodta, punn devchar taka addayta… taka tras korta…” Retir divpi soranttun sangtalo titlo tacho ek sangati porot-porot mhaka polletalo.

 

‘Mhojer devchar bosla kay? Ho mhaka-so polleta?’ Hanvem mhakach mhonnlem.

 

“Vhoy, tea devcharacho atam bhosm’ zavpacho vell pavla… ami ravonanv tie goddiek atam devcharan zopt keloli kudd hanga ubi zatoli… Devcharachea tabeant asloli ti kudd fattlean ubi asa…” ‘Konn kay’ oxie nodren retirak hajir aslolo lok fattlean polleunk laglo…

 

“Vhoy…. To thoddeanchie nodrek disla…. Ani tachevelo devchar atam chodduch khubdovla… Ani…”

 

Tednam sogllo lok mhakach polleta-so mhaka bhas zalo… Hanvem ani vell ibaddunk nam… gaddi suru korun ghora xevttolom.

 

‘Disbhor chintun ani kam’ korun tum thoklai, atam yo, ratbhor mhojer nhid ani visov ghe’ oxem mhonnpi xendriecher udaro poddun astanam, to retir divpi padri, chintnantlean porot mhoje mukhar ubo ravlo - kitle podven ho devchar kaddta! Koso kay? Romant vochun ‘Exorcism’ vixoya vixim xikun aila astolo. Punn tachi vollokh zannun gheunkuch zay mhonn monant gantt marli. Konnak vicharpachem tem tharaytoch, nhiden mhaka aplea gopant ghetlo.

 

(Cholta)

 

Son’var, 28.03.2015

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