‘Literary Criticism’-achea Thermomitorachi Goroz

SON’VARACHIM SUNGTTAM:

‘Literary Criticism’-achea Thermomitorachi Goroz

-Jose Salvador Fernandes



‘Choddxea bhasantlea sahit’yacher literary criticism zata toxem Konknnintlea-i sahit’yacher zavpak zai oxem mhaka monantlean dista. Tea monan, kaim pustokancho vichar-ui mhojea monant chalu asa.” Ponnjechea eka Hotelant sangatan chav piyetana hanvem Konknnintlea tea nanvostea borovpeak mhojem mon ugtem kelem.

“Baba re, tea vixoyak hat ghalpak, amche Konknni bhaxe khatir azun-ui to vell yeunk na.” Tea borovpean kopantle chayek ghontt marit mhonnlem.



“Vell yeunk na mhunn ami toxech ravle zalear, amche bhaxentlea sahit’yak dorzo yeupak khub kallav lagtolo.” Hanvem fuddlem chintun mhonnlem.

“Polle, tum tor atanch amche Konknni bhaxentlea sahit’yacher literary criticism korunk laglo zalear ek bhirant asa – jim konn umedin borovpak fuddem sortat tim bhiyeun borovpachem bond kortelim.” Tea borovpean matxea gombhir mukhamollan sanglem.

“Hantum bhiyeupachem kitem asa? Porikxa dilear bhurgim fail zatelim mhunn chintun xallentleo porikxa konn fattim ghena nhoi? Voilean, porikxa asat mhonnlear bhurgim bhouch fikirin ani chotrayen xiktat nhoi? Ani tanchea tea proyotnancho tankam zo foll mellunk zai to mellta nhoi?” Hanvem taka mhozo vichar pottoupacho proyotn kelo.

“Punn bhurgem porikxe khatir xikta tem aplo fuddar monant dovrun. Tum sahit’yachi molavnni korpak zai mhonnta tednam, borovpeank aplea sahit’yantlean fuddar korpacho asona hem monant dovrunk zai.”

“ Mhunnon amche bhaxentlean ami literary criticism korpacho vell azun-ui yeunk na mhunn justification divop sarkem asa?” Hanv ghunvon-firon tacheach vicharacher ailom.

“Tum yeujita ti gozal chalik lagli zalear tacho porinnam’ tuka atam nhoi, uprant kolltolo. Dekun, te gozalecho vichar sod’deak tori monachea eka konnxak dovorta titlo boro.” Tannem mhaka suchoilem…

… ani tea vixoyacher hanv tache kodde fuddem chodd ulounk vochunk na. Punn monant mat vicharanchea pustokanchim panam ugtim zait aslim.



Aiz amche Konknni bhaxentlean zaitech zann, zaitinch pustokam uzvadda haddtat. Punn tim sogllinch pustokam vixoyache nodrentlean asunk zai titlea kholayechim ani titlea dorjeachim asonant. Thoddeamni tori ‘ailem toxem gailem’ kelelea porim boroun pustokam uzvaddailim ani tim Konknnint fokot bhor ghalpa purtinch urlim. Fuddarak tor hich chal ani poristhiti chalu urli zalear, amkam borea sahit’yachi ruch, gost ani dorzo koso melltolo? Khorem mhonnlear, ti ruch, gost mellpa khatir, khuim tori survat zavpachi goroz asa. Ani hachi survat, Konknni sahit’yachea literary criticism-antlean zavpachi goroz asa.

Eka kallar, bhou thodde lok sahit’ya kelloitale ani tem kellounk panvl fuddem ghalche poilim bhouch chint’tale-yeujitale. Vichar kortale. Veg-vegllea tontr-montran sahit’yache veg-veglle prokar kelloitale. Punn aiz konn-ui, utt’tta bosta pustok uzvaddaun mekllo zata. Apnnem uzvaddailelea pustokak sahit’yachem koslem ani kitlem mol asa vo astelem, Konknni pustokamni bhor ghalche poros sahit’yant tem kitlem bhor ghaltelem oxea vicharancher lokx dinastana khubxe borovpi aplem pustok uzvaddaun meklle zatat. Oxe torechea pustokancher mud’domuch sahit’yachi som’ikxa (literary criticism) zaupachi goroz asa. Ani toxi zali zalear, dubav viret amche bhaxentlea (novea) borovpeank to-to sahit’yacho prokar kellounk ani hatallunk il’lem vegim ginean yetelem. Aplem sahit’ya nirmann korche khatir chotrayen panvlam fuddem ghaltelim.

Vachpeank apnnem kitem-i kaloun-lepddaun dil’le poros, tem borem xizoun kagdacher vaddpa khatir tanchea monanchi toyari asteli. Khorem, borem ani dorjedar sahit’ya kitem tem tori tankam kollun yetelem. Te nodrentlean tim panvlam ubarunk lagtelim, vavrunk lagtelim. Tantuntlean sahit’yachi, bhaxechi udorgot zaunk lagteli. Bhaxecho ani sahit’yacho dorzo-i vaddunk pavtolo.




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26/02/2010

' Mhaka Borovpi Zaunk Zai !'

SON'VARACHIM SUNGTTAM:

'Mhaka Borovpi Zaunk Zai!'
- Jose Salvador Fernandes


“Mhaka Konknnintlo borovpi zaunk zai. Kitem korpachem?” Mhojea ixttachea putan hanv tanchea ghora gel’le kodde mhaka vicharlem.

Hanvem mhonnlem, zata titlem vachop kor. To mhonnpak laglo, “vachunk anik khuim vell asa?”

“Jevpak tori asa mure?” Hanvem hansot chimtte kaddpacho proyotn kelo.

“Jevnnak vell na zalear-ui korcho poddta nhoi? Na zalear pott ravta? Bhuken jiv vetolo?”

“Pottak bhuk lagta, monak tujea bhuk lagona dista!” Hanvem taka chintunk lavpacho proyotn kelo.

“Punn Konknnintlean uzvadda yeupi khubxim borovpam, monachi bhuk laglea ani ti bhuk vachpantlean bagoun, uprant tannim tim borovpam keleant oxim disonant,” oxem sangun tannem mhaka thoddea borovpancheo dekhi dileo. Tantum kovita ani kothancho-i aspav aslo. Ani te vixim hanv taka fuddem kitem tori sangunk sodpacho proyotn kortanach tacho fon vazlo, ani mhaka tannem, “bye, uprant ulounchem” oxem mhonnit dhanvlo.

Monant mhonnlem, gelo to boro zalo, punn vetana chimtto kaddun gelo.

Aiz ami, Konknnintlean khubxe zann borovpam kortana polletanv, punn tantuntlea kaim zannanchea borovpamni, vachpeanchea monak chintunk lavpi vichar asonant. Astele koxe? Tancheach monant te poile asonant. Jea vixoyacher te boroitat, to vixoy soddun tantum her soglem, gorje bhailem asta. Itlench nhoi, tor thodde borovpi eka vixoyacher borovnk bostat ani xevttim vegllench kitem borovn meklle zatat. Thoddeanchim borovpam ordim xizlelim astat, thoddeanchim xizonk naslelim astat, ani thoddeanchim nanvak boroilelim astat. Borovpa fattlo aplo hetu kitem to poilo tanche tankanch khobor asona.

Amchea, Konknnintlea borovpamni choddxe pavtti creativity asona. Dusrea utramni, tea-tea borovpeachi borovpachi khas xoili (style) mhunn asona. Tantum bhas fuloupi, soboupi ani vachpeancher probhav korpi bhaxeche olonkar asonant. Bhas girest korpi bhaxeche gunn asonant. Vachpeank aplea borovpank khillaupi tank asona. Mhonnche, unnem-punnem soglleanchim borovpam ekech xoilichim-xim astat. Taka lagun hea borovpank veglleponn yena. Tim vachpak umed yena.

Borea ani khorea borovpeak khuim aplim soroll ani nitt chintnam ani vichar lokam meren pavoitolo zalear, taka bhas bori yeunk zai oxem mhonn zaite zann sabar pavtti sangtana aikunk yeta. Veakoronn, bhaxentli utravoll oxea sabar bhaxik angancho tannem vichar korpacho asta. Amchea khubxea borovpamni hem bhou unnea promannan polleunk mellta. Itlench nhoi, tor amchim borovpam dusrean konnem-i sudraun uzvadda haddlim zalear, tim ami porot vachun polleupacho ani bhaxeche nodrentlean je tantum bodol keleat te kiteak keleat tacho konnuch porot vichar korpacho tokos ghena. Zalear, amchea eka borea borovpeachi koxi opekxa korum yeta?

Boro ani khoro borovpi kompiutor chalu korun vo ‘pen-paper’ gheun “atam kitem boroum-ia?” oxem kednach mhonnchona. Itlim vorsam amche bhaxentle je borovpi tizle ani ghoddle tanchean legit tokos ghenastana ani sod-vavr korinastana borovp korunk zaina, ani toxe te korche-i nant.

Boro borovpi zavop hi ek kola asa oxem zorui sabar zann mhonntat, torui koxem borovp hem vijnean (science) asta. Boro borovpi zatolo zalear tuje kodde kitem tori sangpa sarkem asunk zai, ani tem sangche khatir tuje kodde bhaxechi kola asunk zai. Ani tantuntleanuch borovpeachi creativity ani khorai disun yeta.